I will give you some feedbacks(others can do it too) that will improve your game :
1.Stop tanking that much,play more pass game
2.Stop shifting that much while tackling ( it will not help u,i now by myself)
3.Play a fast passing game,dont hold the ball too much
4.Play lmb game,space is not too good when crossing,lmb is best
5.You can watch if u want (will be good) some replays of our games,to see how we play in def/attack and maybe you can learn something from there.
If other players can give you 1 feedback,i am asking them to do it
You are not a bad player,but you can improve a lot